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« Thread started on: Aug 2nd, 2007, 12:02pm » |
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Prologue
The moon shone on the cats, with claws flasing, and loud yowls as cat died. Slowley the noise faded into an erie silence. No cat in the clearing moved, blood flowed all over the ground, a queen lay shuddering there, alone. Dead cats lay strewn all over the field. there was a stream of blood flowing, it was turning into a lake. Yowls of triumph sounded from the surounding lands. Boodclan had won. The surviving warriors retreated, all joining together. There was silence again, not a thin moved, exept those moved by the wind. There in the middle of the cats, lay one kit, the only thing that moved.
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Re: Firestripe
« Reply #1 on: Aug 2nd, 2007, 12:11pm » |
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Chapter 1
My heart pounded, i yowled for food, no one came, i was left, alone, in the wilderness, where i didn't know how to live. There was no way i could survive. A cat finaly took me sunrises later.
"food!!" i cried, pleading. then many sharp pains in my back, and i fell to the ground, limp.
when i woke i was in a diffrent place. It was warm, cozy, and there was a cat right next to me. "food?" h asked looking into her eyes
"Yes, hav your fill" she purred.
i had all the milk i could drink, and went to sleep. This, i later realized, was the start of my new life.
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« Reply #2 on: Aug 2nd, 2007, 12:19pm » |
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Chapter 2
My life continued as a kit, plenty of food, warm, kind cats, and i made many friends. then, after six moons everything changed.
"All cats old enough to catch there own prey gather for a clan meeting" called our leader, maplestar.
all cats gathered, and i was pushed out of the warm air, to the edge of the crowed.
"By naming apprentices, we show that Rainclan will survive and remain strong. Firekit now you will be knowen as firepaw. Bramblepool, you are ready for an apprentice. You will be firepaws's mentor." she mewed.
"I was pushed to the front, and touched noses with bramblepool. my heart was pounding, i didn't know what was happening.
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« Reply #3 on: Aug 2nd, 2007, 12:23pm » |
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Chapter 3
That night i went into a new den. I no longer had a warmer, and bigger cat next to me, i had cats my size. the next morning i fallowed the apprentices, and ate a piece of what was called 'fresh-kill'. i hated the tast.
Then bramblepool came up to me "do u want to train?"
"uh.....sure" i said nervously.
We went out into the forest, i got seperated from bramblepool, so i was really scared. My heart started to pound once again.
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« Reply #4 on: Aug 2nd, 2007, 12:38pm » |
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Chapter 4
I had found a small warm are, so that is where i slept.
I woke up, i coudn't help but let out a yowl of surprise, i didn't know where i was. some animal came, picked me up, and craddled me in her arms. I sat there, and purred. I curled up on the lap, and went to sleep.
Later i woke up, something had been put in front of me, and i sniffed it. it smelled like food, so i tried it. It tasted nothing like the strange food i had had in my old home. i liked it better.
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« Reply #5 on: Aug 5th, 2007, 4:31pm » |
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Chapter 5
I live this life for many moons, but then i dreamed of my old home, of the forest.
One day i ran away to go back to the clans. I ran into the twoleg nests,m i wandered all over them, going out only at night. after alost a moon i finaly exaed. Then i had to enter some white tall things, that are called mountains.
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« Reply #6 on: Aug 13th, 2007, 1:29pm » |
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Chapter 6
I wandered through the mountains for many moons, i hoped i would be able to find the clan i used to be in.
when i was finaly on the other side i saw what looked like a good place for clans to live, and i found clans, but not the ones i used to be in. but i joined anyway. i joined pineclan.
thats all. how do u guys like it?
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Re: Firestripe
« Reply #7 on: Aug 14th, 2007, 4:55pm » |
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interesting...
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--Run, run like you do.I'm chasin you.I'm on your tail, I'm gainin fast.You're going nowhere, try, to fix what you've done.Turn back the time.The night is calling then we're falling faster now!Pushin me away, every last word, every single thing you say.--
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« Reply #8 on: Aug 14th, 2007, 6:16pm » |
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um, thanks.
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Re: Firestripe
« Reply #9 on: Aug 14th, 2007, 6:35pm » |
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it's cool
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Whats perhaps the best thing in the world?
Les Mis
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« Reply #10 on: Aug 14th, 2007, 9:35pm » |
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thanks, it was sorta hard for me, i don't think i am a good writer.... 
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« Reply #11 on: Jan 13th, 2008, 11:00am » |
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lol sorry that the chapters are so short, i think i'l redo it sometime.
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Re: Firestripe
« Reply #12 on: Jan 18th, 2008, 5:45pm » |
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i liked it.
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« Reply #13 on: May 14th, 2009, 7:46pm » |
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thanks lily! 
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